okay so im writing somthing for ebglish i only have like a page and i need to finish the whole story in not even 2 hours! so please tell me if its a good idea.
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We had been planning to go camping for weeks, “us” being me, my sister Delilah, friends of mine and Delilah. DeeDee was kind of scared to go as she hates bears but were supposed to be going in our parent’s trailer. Our parents suddenly had to go on a business trip the day after we were supposed to go camping. So, they were leaving me and DeeDee alone, in the house.
“But mummy! Why can’t we go?!” I whined “we’d be with our friends!”
I had been trying to convince her to let us go but no luck yet.
“Bea” she says warningly
“You’ll leave us alone in a house? But not camping with people?” Ha that had to get her. I hope. She sighs “Fine ill think about it” I scream
“ YAY!” I give her a huge hug as my sister prances in
“Bee isn’t it a bit…early for screaming?” we both laugh and I let go of our mom and give DeeDee a hug “morning sleepyhead” We both smile and turn as our dad walks in
“Hi daddy” we say together
“Alright how much do you want?” he asks laughing when we look at him
“Only 50 bucks…each” I say “LEEEAS!!”
“fine here you go girls” he says handing us the money.
“Thank you!” we grin .
“were going shopping today” Dee says to our parents “ were going to grab breakfast on the way “bye!” she drags me out of the kitchen.
“ We should call Jess and Lexxy” I tell her.
“There already meeting us there. Now lets go!”

We called Jess and Lexxy and headed to the mall. We waited a bit until we saw them. “Hey guys!! They squealed running towards us and giving us huge hugs.
“Guess what?!”
What?” they ask
“Were going camping! Are you coming??”
“omg yes!” they squeal. “When?”
“ Day after tomorrow!” Dee says “ We should go in now, I’m starving!”
“ same here” I chime in.

We go into the mall and head straight to the food court. Me and Dee grab some French toast and orange juice while Jess and Lexxy grabbed salad from the salad bar. As we finished I ask “How much money did you get?”
“I got $70” says Jess.
“I only got $30” Replies Lexxy.
“ We have 50 each now lets go!” I say impatiently

They all laugh and we head to Hot topic to try on clothes. We all ran to the clearance section and grabbed all the clothes we could handle. Me, Jess and Dee stayed out while Lexxy went into the dressing room. We sat and talked until she came out, and oh my goodness was it an outfit. She was wearing a Red and black Pinstripe Vinyl Skirt with
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i know i just cut off but i had to no its not the ending im working on it! tips please!